Book of Mormon · Alma 36

Could You Do This?

The chiastic structure of Alma's testimony to his son Helaman

Descent  ·  Pivot  ·  Ascent

What Is a Chiasm?

Long before anyone wrote on paper, ancient peoples composed poetry and sacred texts using a literary structure called chiasm — named for the Greek letter chi (χ), which crosses in the middle. A chiasm works like a mirror: ideas introduced in the first half of a passage are repeated in reverse order in the second half, with the most important idea placed at the very center.

Think of it as a pattern: A, B, C … X … C′, B′, A′. The opening and closing echo each other. The second element corresponds to the second-to-last. And whatever stands at the center — element X — is the heart of the entire composition. Everything else exists to frame it.

Chiasm is found throughout the ancient world — in Mesopotamian literature, in Greek and Latin poetry, and especially in Hebrew scripture. The Old Testament is filled with it. Scholars of ancient Near Eastern literature recognize chiasm as a hallmark of sophisticated, orally-composed sacred writing. It takes extraordinary literary skill to construct. A master chiasm doesn't just organize ideas — it makes the structure itself carry theological meaning. The shape of the text is part of the message.

In a chiasm, you don't just read to the end — you read to the center, and then back out again. The journey in is the journey out, transformed.

A Young, Uneducated Farm Boy

Joseph Smith was 23 years old when he dictated the Book of Mormon. He had perhaps three years of formal schooling. He had not studied Hebrew, Greek, or ancient literature. He had no access to academic works on biblical poetry or Near Eastern composition. By every account of those who witnessed the translation, he dictated continuously, without notes, rarely if ever going back to review what had been said.

Chiasmus as a literary form was not even identified and named in biblical scholarship until the early 19th century — and those findings were in German academic journals that Joseph Smith almost certainly never encountered. The discovery that the Book of Mormon contains chiastic structures was not made until 1967, when a young Latter-day Saint scholar named John Welch, studying in Germany, recognized the pattern while reading about chiasm in ancient texts and realized he had seen it in the Book of Mormon.

Welch's most striking find was the 36th chapter of Alma — a father's personal testimony to his son. What Welch discovered was not a simple two- or three-element chiasm. It was a seven-level interlocking structure, spanning thirty verses, in which every element on the descent has a precise verbal and thematic counterpart on the ascent — and the single verse at the center is the theological hinge on which the entire composition turns.

The structure is not decorative. The center — the hinge — is the cry of a desperate man to Jesus Christ. Every verse before it is a descent into darkness. Every verse after it is an ascent into light. The shape of the text enacts what it describes: a life turned around at a single moment.

Before you read what follows, consider what it would take to compose something like this. Not just to tell a story of conversion — but to tell it so that the opening verses mirror the closing ones, the second element mirrors the second-to-last, the third the third-to-last, all the way to a single sentence at the center that carries the weight of the whole.

Consider that the person who produced this text had no pen, no paper to plan on, no ability to go back and revise. Consider that he was 23 years old, barely literate, dictating out loud to a scribe in a farmhouse in rural New York.

Could you do this?

Now to the study of Alma 36 — a comparison of the descent and ascent from the Great Hinge.

Alma 36 — The Chiastic Structure

A — Commandments & prosperity
C — Fathers in captivity; God delivers
B — Born of God, not of self
D — Destroy / build the church
E — Fell to earth / stood on feet
F — Three days darkness / joy
G — Harrowed up / no more
X — The cry to Christ
Descent · vv. 1–17
Ascent · vv. 19–30
A Keep the commandments · trust in God · prosper in the land

1  My son, give ear to my words; for I swear unto you, that inasmuch as ye shall keep the commandments of God ye shall prosper in the land.

3  And now, O my son Helaman, behold, thou art in thy youth, and therefore, I beseech of thee that thou wilt hear my words and learn of me; for I do know that whosoever shall put their trust in God shall be supported in their trials, and their troubles, and their afflictions, and shall be lifted up at the last day.

A′ Keep the commandments · prosper · according to his word

30  But behold, my son, this is not all; for ye ought to know as I do know, that inasmuch as ye shall keep the commandments of God ye shall prosper in the land; and ye ought to know also, that inasmuch as ye will not keep the commandments of God ye shall be cut off from his presence. Now this is according to his word.

C Captivity of our fathers · none could deliver them but God

2  I would that ye should do as I have done, in remembering the captivity of our fathers; for they were in bondage, and none could deliver them except it was the God of Abraham, and the God of Isaac, and the God of Jacob; and he surely did deliver them in their afflictions.

Note: v. 2 appears between vv. 1 and 3 in the text. Its placement here reflects its thematic correspondence with C′ — both invoke the fathers in bondage and God's deliverance — rather than strict canonical position.
C′ Fathers delivered out of Egypt and Jerusalem · retain in remembrance their captivity

28  And I know that he will raise me up at the last day, to dwell with him in glory; yea, and I will praise him forever, for he has brought our fathers out of Egypt, and he has swallowed up the Egyptians in the Red Sea; and he led them by his power into the promised land; yea, and he has delivered them out of bondage and captivity from time to time.

29  Yea, and he has also brought our fathers out of the land of Jerusalem; and he has also, by his everlasting power, delivered them out of bondage and captivity, from time to time even down to the present day; and I have always retained in remembrance their captivity; yea, and ye also ought to retain in remembrance, as I have done, their captivity.

B Born of God · not of the temporal · not of worthiness of myself

4  And I would not that ye think that I know of myself—not of the temporal but of the spiritual, not of the carnal mind but of God.

5  Now, behold, I say unto you, if I had not been born of God I should not have known these things; but God has, by the mouth of his holy angel, made these things known unto me, not of any worthiness of myself;

B′ Many born of God · have tasted as I have tasted · knowledge is of God

26  For because of the word which he has imparted unto me, behold, many have been born of God, and have tasted as I have tasted, and have seen eye to eye as I have seen; therefore they do know of these things of which I have spoken, as I do know; and the knowledge which I have is of God.

Note: v. 26 sits between vv. 25 and 27 in the canonical text, inside the D′ block. It is placed here on the strength of the verbal echo: "born of God" and "not of worthiness of myself" (B) answered by "born of God" and "the knowledge which I have is of God" (B′).
D Went about to destroy the church · God sent his angel to stop them

6  For I went about with the sons of Mosiah, seeking to destroy the church of God; but behold, God sent his holy angel to stop us by the way.

D′ Labored without ceasing to bring souls unto repentance · God delivers

24  Yea, and from that time even until now, I have labored without ceasing, that I might bring souls unto repentance; that I might bring them to taste of the exceeding joy of which I did taste; that they might also be born of God, and be filled with the Holy Ghost.

25  Yea, and now behold, O my son, the Lord doth give me exceedingly great joy in the fruit of my labors;

27  And I have been supported under trials and troubles of every kind, yea, and in all manner of afflictions; yea, God has delivered me from prison, and from bonds, and from death; yea, and I do put my trust in him, and he will still deliver me.

Note: v. 26 (B′) appears between vv. 25 and 27 in the canonical text and is placed with B′ above on thematic grounds.
E Voice of thunder · fell to the earth · Arise · the angel commands

7  And behold, he spake unto us, as it were the voice of thunder, and the whole earth did tremble beneath our feet; and we all fell to the earth, for the fear of the Lord came upon us.

8  But behold, the voice said unto me: Arise. And I arose and stood up, and beheld the angel.

9  And he said unto me: If thou wilt of thyself be destroyed, seek no more to destroy the church of God.

E′ God on his throne · limbs received strength · stood upon his feet · born of God

22  Yea, methought I saw, even as our father Lehi saw, God sitting upon his throne, surrounded with numberless concourses of angels, in the attitude of singing and praising their God; yea, and my soul did long to be there.

23  But behold, my limbs did receive their strength again, and I stood upon my feet, and did manifest unto the people that I had been born of God.

F Three days and nights · could not open his mouth · racked with torment · pains of hell

10  And it came to pass that I fell to the earth; and it was for the space of three days and three nights that I could not open my mouth, neither had I the use of my limbs.

11  And the angel spake more things unto me, which were heard by my brethren, but I did not hear them; for when I heard the words—If thou wilt be destroyed of thyself, seek no more to destroy the church of God—I was struck with such great fear and amazement lest perhaps I should be destroyed, that I fell to the earth and I did hear no more.

12  But I was racked with eternal torment, for my soul was harrowed up to the greatest degree and racked with all my sins.

13  Yea, I did remember all my sins and iniquities, for which I was tormented with the pains of hell; yea, I saw that I had rebelled against my God, and that I had not kept his holy commandments.

F′ Marvelous light · joy as exceeding as the pain · nothing so exquisite and sweet

20  And oh, what joy, and what marvelous light I did behold; yea, my soul was filled with joy as exceeding as was my pain!

21  Yea, I say unto you, my son, that there could be nothing so exquisite and so bitter as were my pains. Yea, and again I say unto you, my son, that on the other hand, there can be nothing so exquisite and sweet as was my joy.

G Harrowed up by the memory of sins · horror · wished extinction · remembered Christ

14  Yea, and I had murdered many of his children, or rather led them away unto destruction; yea, and in fine so great had been my iniquities, that the very thought of coming into the presence of my God did rack my soul with inexpressible horror.

15  Oh, thought I, that I could be banished and become extinct both soul and body, that I might not be brought to stand in the presence of my God, to be judged of my deeds.

16  And now, for three days and for three nights was I racked, even with the pains of a damned soul.

17  And it came to pass that as I was thus racked with torment, while I was harrowed up by the memory of my many sins, behold, I remembered also to have heard my father prophesy unto the people concerning the coming of one Jesus Christ, a Son of God, to atone for the sins of the world.

G′ Could remember pains no more · harrowed up by memory of sins no more

19  And now, behold, when I thought this, I could remember my pains no more; yea, I was harrowed up by the memory of my sins no more.

The Pivot · Verse 18
X The cry to Christ · the center of the entire composition

18  Now, as my mind caught hold upon this thought, I cried within my heart: O Jesus, thou Son of God, have mercy on me, who am in the gall of bitterness, and am encircled about by the everlasting chains of death!